..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
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..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
...I saw a sign and it was white..
..::But it was really hard to take a bite::.
...I saw a bird was flying to the sky...
...::I looked up and made a fry::...
...I saw a girl was waiting for a boy...
...::And the boy was too busy to play with his toy::..
...I saw a creep down the stret...
..::And it tried to licking my feet::..
...I saw a goat was trying to float...
..::By sitting in a little boat::
...:::::::::::::::JERK:::::::::::::::....
..::But it was really hard to take a bite::.
...I saw a bird was flying to the sky...
...::I looked up and made a fry::...
...I saw a girl was waiting for a boy...
...::And the boy was too busy to play with his toy::..
...I saw a creep down the stret...
..::And it tried to licking my feet::..
...I saw a goat was trying to float...
..::By sitting in a little boat::
...:::::::::::::::JERK:::::::::::::::....
Re: ..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
Fishy wrote:oh, that sounds nice girl
i didn't really get the meaning though
..lolz ..datz why i called it FREAKy..lolz
..NEW NEW NEW POEm...lolz...
[right][center] ...I WISH..POEm..lolz
..::I wish that i can fly::..
So I can live in the sky
..::I wish i will never die::..
So i can learn how to lie a guy
[strike]....::::::::::::POEMS of the SEnses::::::..........
....The Beach..
I see the blue and clean ocean
I hear the voice of the wind through my ear
I feel the wind is holding me tight
I smell the fresh air from the sky
I taste the salty sand from the sea.
.....:::::::::THE SOng:::::..........
I see the notes are soaring around
I hear the rhythm is rolling to my soul
I feel peaceful when he started to sing
I smell the fresh heart of himself
I taste sweety when your in me...
P/S:..I wrote it when i'm practising how to write a poem, and i miss ya, miss ya so much.. and i got it feelings....to wrote this poem...Miss ya.[.kooL dIkk]...><!.mAh.littLE Duck.
p/s :...Its not good enough...juz leave ur comms...thanks...i will try to improve..
..::I wish that i can fly::..
So I can live in the sky
..::I wish i will never die::..
So i can learn how to lie a guy
[strike]....::::::::::::POEMS of the SEnses::::::..........
....The Beach..
I see the blue and clean ocean
I hear the voice of the wind through my ear
I feel the wind is holding me tight
I smell the fresh air from the sky
I taste the salty sand from the sea.
.....:::::::::THE SOng:::::..........
I see the notes are soaring around
I hear the rhythm is rolling to my soul
I feel peaceful when he started to sing
I smell the fresh heart of himself
I taste sweety when your in me...
P/S:..I wrote it when i'm practising how to write a poem, and i miss ya, miss ya so much.. and i got it feelings....to wrote this poem...Miss ya.[.
p/s :...Its not good enough...juz leave ur comms...thanks...i will try to improve..
Re: ..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
nice rhyme
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Re: ..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
hehe whoz dat luky duk
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Age : 30
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Registration date : 2007-10-01
Re: ..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
vgcql wrote:composer in the future i think ^^
..lolz...thanks ya..
Re: ..MAh fReakY pOEm..[Solei-PAm]
uhm.....rite...we did poetry in clazz n i kan't get da hang of it.....btw...nice job....lurvin' da poem though i dun't even understand.....lolz....
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